Friday, February 18, 2011

cookie

My cookie is spotted’ and is tawny coloured. In my cookie has craters like the moon.Our cookie is crevice like an Earthquake’ on the top.


2 comments:

Kelsey Robinson said...

Hi, Jesiah! My name is Kelsey and I am a college student in Alabama, USA. I am going to school to become a teacher and I am commenting on your blog for one of my classes. I think you did a really great job comparing your cookie to earthquakes and the moon. It does look like crevices that earthquakes leave on the ground sometimes!

Patrick said...

I really liked your story. I liked the chocolate and how well you had drawn the cookie. Well done.